So far in the story has been getting better. It has been introducing all the characters and getting to the main plot of things. The main character is poneyboy he is one of the youngest of the greaser gang and he really does not like to be in fights like some of the other greasers. Actually if anything poneyboy tries to avoid fights. His best friend would be Johnny. Johnny is pretty similar in a couple ways. Johnny does not like to fight but he will in the case that he has to. The main plot of this story is the fighting between the two gangs the socs and the greasers. It has actually been really bad, in chapter four poneyboy and Johnny were being harassed by socs and Johnny ended up killing one of the leaders, bob. There are also the other gang members like Dally and Darry.
I believe one thing that might happen in this story is going to be a big part of the soc and greaser fighting. I believe that someone is going is going to end up dying in the greaser gang because of all the characters in their gang, not to mention that they already killed one of their lead socs, so the socs might want revenge on the greasers. However I do not think that the fight will involve Johnny or Poneyboy because those two are already scared as it is because of killing that soc. They decided that they are just going to leave because they don’t want to get in any trouble with the high society socs, who have the money in court also they are also the better people to the court because of their life style. It is not as bad as the greasers. On top of that I’m sure that Johnny and poneyboy are leaving because they don’t want to start anymore trouble for their brothers and the greasers in general. I think that the next couple chapters will have pretty big events in the story.
Your prediction about somebody dieing in the greaser gang is probably right because Jhoney is about to die
ReplyDeleteyou could of improved on your introduction because there really is no introduction
overall it's good